Questions about Writer’s Workshop

When my good friend Melanie Holtsman from Chets Creek Elementary asked me if I could help connect her with some teachers here at ISB, to record questions for one of the co-authors, Ruth Ayres, of a new book out called, Day by Day: Refining Writing Workshop Through 180 Days of Reflective Practice, how could I resist?

Skype enables us to experience such great learning opportunities and it was a lot of fun connecting people across the world. On top of that, we also got some answers & tips to some questions that we have about the Writer’s Workshop model. ISB is not as far along in their workshop model journey as Chets Creek Elementary, so it was great to hear questions that Chets Creek Elementary teachers had for Ruth Ayres.

Here’s the video Melanie created of all our questions and Ruth’s answers for us. I’m sure that you’ll get something out of it, especially if your school uses the Writer’s Workshop model.

A Conversation with Ruth Ayres from Melanie Holtsman on Vimeo.

Thanks Mr Crosby!

Today we used a new tool in our classroom.  We now have these awesome Writer’s Phones, thanks to my good friend, Brian Crosby, in Nevada, USA and his post “Can You Hear Me …. Can You Hear Me Now? DSCN3902

The phones, were of course, a huge hit and they enjoyed a very successful integration into our Writer’s Workshop routine. DSCN3901

Here’s our reflection on using the Writer’s Phones for Writing:

“They worked really well because I DSCN3900could hear my voice and I knew where I had to change punctuation.  It even helped me see spelling mistakes.”

“It made me pay more attention to what I had written.”

“While I was reading, using the telephone, I heard extra words that I really didn’t need.”

“Even though everyone was reading, I could still hear myself because the phone makes my voice echo in my ear. Usually everyone else reading puts me off.”DSCN3898

Learning got messy in Room 231 today.  Thanks for sharing this fabulous idea Brian!

Writing Workshop 101 – Maggie Moon

EARCOS March, 2009 – Session Notes (my thoughts in italics)

  • Students learn at different rates – instruction should be differentiated
  • Be engaged in authentic work – give them strategies for where writers get their ideas from (key to writers workshop)
  • Explicit instruction going on
  • Students need a model – do writing in front of them.  You can use mentor text, show them writing (it doesn’t always have to be yours)
  • Your goal is to give them strategies to try, and encourage independence and choice
  • When you are modeling – don’t give them a perfect model – step by step feel to it, show yourself having a struggle, (students see the action in detail – they see you struggle) try to write things close to what your students are writing. What you are making as a model is as close to what your students are writing.
  • Goal of unit-of-study is to have a container that is holding everyone together
  • Good writing workshop has a layer of assessment – formal and informal – informs you what you will be doing with your whole class – perhaps the whole class is not getting the concepts that you are introducing. What will you teach more of, less of?
  • Possibility of Writers Workshop 3-4 times a week within a balanced literacy programme – in order to fit everything in – not ideal but could still work (perhaps this is how to fit in specific grammar practise – out of 6 day timetable, one day is grammar lesson not writers workshop)
  • Workshop Structure:  45 mins: Minilesson (10mins) Worktime (30mins – changes over time, teacher confers while students work, one to one conference, small group work: Mid workshop Teaching point (2-5mins) – take something that you have noticed – manage any little thing back to the whole class. Teaching Share (5-10mins) take time to reflect, work with writing partner, ask questions.  You can stretch the workshop out to an hour if students can stay focused on the writing -the ones that have been writing for a while.
  • Mini lessons more than 10mins are maxi-lessons (be clear, concise, planned ahead of time) This is an area that definitely needs to be a focus for me – mini lessons are way tooooo long!!
  • Folders and Notebooks – Upper Grades (3-5+) use Writer’s Notebooks and Drafting Folders. Notebooks are for collecting entries.  Writing Folder for the drafting process – write a draft, and revise it.
  • Writing Process for Writers Ages 4-7/8:
    • Immersing
    • Rehearsing and Planning
    • Drafting
    • Revising (taking words out, making sentences better)
    • Editing  (fixing mistakes, punctuation, grammar)
    • Publishing (final product – making your final product – want this aspect to go as quickly as possible)
    • Celebrating!! (share the pieces with the class, invite people in, blog? principal, kinderbuddies,writing contest, published authors)
  • Writing Process for Writers Ages 8++
    • Immersing
    • Generating (Collecting) Entries (in the writer’s notebook)
    • Choosing a “Seed Entry” (still in the writer’s notebook)
    • Developing and Nurturing
    • Planning and Drafting (see their seed entry differently – don’t copy it – model this) draft on computer – print out Version 1 then make revising changes so that you can track.  Take advantage of spellcheck (that’s what we do).
    • Revising
    • Editing
    • Publishing and Celebrating (ideas: Museum (comment sheet underneath), Group sharing, blogging – authentic audience, Author’s Chair)
  • MiniLessons (sense of gathering on the mat area – not at the desks)
    • One, explicit teaching point
    • Student gather at a meeting area
    • Teaching points fit together to create a “Unit of Study”
    • Four parts to the lesson – predictable structure – connection, teaching, active engagement, link – how does this fit in with what we are trying to do, not just another task.
    • Important for kids to see teaching point in action
  • Publishing – ok vrs perfect – if it’s taking a long time you need to consider how much of the writing process you are knocking out.  Suggestion from audience – partner/peer editing
    Some units could be teacher-formal editing but not all (Maggie took a post-it and kids had to find the words that she found – don’t write all over their writing – it’s a respect thing.  ELL different ball game for them – they are learning a new language – more time to help them with the editing to help them to learn rather than the focus on the final product – the more you do it for them, the less it becomes their work.  Drawing, then labelling, scaffold works well for ELL students – this is still writer’s workshop (think how can this go for them based on what works for them)
  • One to One conferring:  Has a consistent structure (if you have 20 students in your class- across a week you see all of your students at least once – conference times vary but they are not 20 minutes long!!)  Research – talk to student, see what they are doing, watch them; Decide (quick decision – compliment and then Teach) Coach:  Link:
  • Writing Centres – tape, pencil sharpener, stapler, scissors, date stamps, paper choice, drafting paper, mentor texts, reference materials – don’t be the gate keeper!
  • Writing Partnerships – may or may not be ability based, meeting on a regular basis, to read their work aloud, ask questions/advice of their partners, and to give feedback – this needs to be modelled, taught – watch them, make notes on what they aren’t doing so well in this part and turn it into a minilesson.  The longer you can keep these partnerships together, the better.  At least some span of time – you can change after several unit of studies.
  • http://unitsofstudy.com  One way the year of writing could go – it is a RESOURCE – you could follow directly but you don’t have to.  You should make adjustments to fit in for what your students need.
  • Units of Study – Grade 4/5  A version of how a year could unfold
    • Launching the Writing Workshop (routines etc)
    • Raising the Quality of Personal Narrative
    • Realistic Fiction
    • Personal Essay
    • Writing Fiction, HF, Fastasy or Mystery Making RW Connections
    • Literary Essays or Fournalism
    • Content Areas Writing, Writing to Convey Ideas and Information
    • Memoir – The Arto f Writing Well
    • Independent Reading Projects / Revision
  • Essentials for the success of Writing Workshop:  Don’t wing it – planned ahead of time, waht do you want your students to practise, what do you want your students to create.  Covers the level stands or school benchmarks.  Lasts between 3-6 weeks (typically 4 weeks)  Strikes a blaance between teaching, assessing, teaching assessing
  • Maggie did a little small moment mini-lesson – she wrote a story about snorkling with Diane, we then turned and talked about our ideas for our own small moments:
    • Turn and Talk – is the active engagement part (Link – so this is something, where any little story that happened to you and you’re trying to make it sound like it is happening all over again.
    • Dark rain clouds were building up in the sky.  I hope we are not going to be flying through that rain as we walked down the ramp into the waiting airplane.  I put all our luggage in the overhead locker and (I really struggled trying to write like it was happening, I kept wanting to write in the past tense!!)
    • Reverse pyschology – cut off the writing on a high note – don’t fall into the trap of letting writing going if it’s going well.  When something matters to you – when it’s meaningful it’s much more powerful – that’s why you don’t limit the choice.  The big goal is to just let’s all write!  This is not the final product – it’s a collection of entries – one of those will be revised.
    • Have struggling writers “underline” the words they don’t know how to spell.  Writers try their best, sound words out, make sure they are not blocked from writing.
  • Maggie will email powerpoint
  • Get your own notebook – have to be self-disciplined about it.  Start writing because you will learn what to teach when you go through it.  Make your publication dates public.